What is thinking than a voice in our head?
Are those voices them
or are they ours?
Knowledge is a form
that is never dead,
And blossoms bright
like dahlia flowers.
The false shadows
that linger in the light,
Are only truths ready
to be heard from.
But they will not go
down without a fight,
And shall not leave
the mind until it’s calm
To fully understand
circumstances,
One must jump blindly
into the darkness.
Though one must be
careful about choices,
Because those choices
may lead to daftness
This reality one must
discover
Can be found by
breaking the old thinker
8 comments:
Nice Sonnet! I like the rhyming you had as well as the vocabulary you used! :)
Miranda, great job on your Shakespearean type sonnet! Everything is well written and easy to understand! Your use of comparison and imagery really painted a picture in my mind! Great job!
Your blog is probably one of the best I've ever seen. From music to the little fishies to the posts on Mondays, great job! :( How are you studying for the final? Let me know your strategies! http://lvalenzuelarhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Good use of vocabulary and nice rhyming scheme. Clearly captures the scope of Plato's Allegory Of the Cave. Superb use of imagery!
Oh and your blog itself is extremely nice. You made it your own and I like your posts that don't have to do with the course itself
it's neat seeing how people approach this sonnet. for instance, i wrote mine about the two prisoners only, while you covered the allegory as a whole and its meaning. thumbs up dude
I like your shakespearian sonnet! The rhyming is good,and I like your choice in vocabulary. http://druckersrhsenglitcomp13.blogspot.com
I see you took the time to decorate your blog....unlike me when I did it.
I like your sonnet. It has a great rhyming scheme and use of vocabulary.
I invited you to read and comment "THINKING OUTSIDE THE BOX" on my blog.
http://dannytbuuluu.blogspot.com
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